The Himalayan Elephant
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I do not know much about elephants, but I am familiar with some stories about the Pandava brothers. The title indicated it was about an elephant, but I think it could have been a little more indicative towards an adventure of two brothers.Introduction:
The intro tells us about two brothers who are craving adventure. They go to a shaman, whose stories inspires them to go out and find their very own tale. It made me want to know what kind of adventure they would go on: would they get into trouble like the shaman’s stories hinted at, or would they find this Himalayan elephant?Design:
I think a more creative background could have been chosen, and perhaps more interesting pictures. I really enjoyed the breakdown of the hike-climb-mysterious beast, and found that the overall story flowed well.(“Elephant” by Alessandro Desantis from Unsplash Photos) |
Epic Women Tell All
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Again, this is not a topic I am wholly familiar with – but, I do enjoy a good drama-filled TV show! The title could have been a little bit more clear in that is it a talk show (“The Real Live of Epic Indian Housewives”, perhaps), but I figured it out soon enough.Introduction:
The intro is very clear on explaining what the storybook is about. It really made me want to read the rest of the story (again, drama TV lover here), and was very creative in how it portrayed these epic women. I especially liked the addition of the commercial break inserts. It offered breaks in the story (which can be nice, instead of non-stop writing), as well as making it seem more realistic.
Oh, you looked at a Vishnu Storybook, Morgan - that's great! As you can see, each person's Storybook about the avatars or about the epic women would be different from anybody else's because of the stories they choose and also the storytelling style. Sometimes people come up with really elaborate frametales of their own (like in the Himalayan Elephant), while others just have a very basic and simple frame, with the main focus being on the traditional stories. So, you now have a good idea of the different kinds of choices you will be thinking about when you brainstorm your own Storybook at the end of Week 2! :-)
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